This was great and I needed a laugh. Thank you

I would love to play this :)
Ayucea has a really cute design, the whole movie does actually.
And the bickering with the fully formed virus was really funny, the open ending was interesting as well.
Does the virus that wants to be normal have a name yet?

I definitely don't think that the length of the song is a flaw at all. That was very epic. I think it's super impressive when instrumental can evoke specific emotion. It was griping, and felt like a journey.
I relate to things never quite feeling finished, and that perfectionist nit pick mode. But I think you did the right thing with ripping the bandaid off, so to speak. I liked it a lot, and think it turned out great.

Very cute! I love the accessories. And i really like the last one, with a scene. It would be cool to see it fully rendered someday.
Does she have a name?

Very cool! I like the bright colors and eye style. The hand is done very well by the way.
For realistic proportions the heads a little big, but I think it's perfect for some stylizations.
A tip I'm trying to implement is: don't be afraid of trying different kinds of lineart to show texteres. Ex: jewelry , clothes , skin , hair, all would look a little different from eachother

Happy birthday! Congrats on making it through!